This week we had our film crits where each group would show their film and get feedback from our peers. Mine and Ellie's went really well as we got mostly positive comments, which is a lot better than we were expecting as our audio crit didn't go too well.
Positive Feedback
- Good contrast between audio and visual,
- Liked the comedic part of the piece (repetition of the work 'steak'),
- Edited really well,
- Liked that we used archive footage as no one else has done that.
Improvements
The only improvement we were told we could make was that we could cut out the part where you can see hands handling the meat and just leave the piece so that you only see the meat and the archive footage.
This would then mean that our piece would not fit the brief as it would not be 3 minutes long which is what the brief stated. However, our seminar leader said that this should not be a problem as our film would work much better as a shorter, stronger piece.
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